Jan 14 2012
flashcatindustries asked: Poem rules. Rolls along the tongue super well, does rhyming without being corny, and all the wordplay/trickery works for the most part. As soon as I came I went. goes off the rails a bit at points, but its good You should do something with it, write it out on a scroll or something.
Like Jack K before I even read him. Haha. Thank you very much man. Yeah, there are points where it was all over the place; I would come up with the lines in my head in bed, and race over to my desk in the dark and scribble connecting words, so it never was the same. I do intend to edit it sometime. Thank you very, very much!
